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The most precious thing

There is no trinket, nor power or feeling that I can liken unto you.

I have little wealth in this world, but in you my love I have it all.

No friend or family, nothing else holds my love as you do,

Never give up my fair Elektra, look to the wind and hear my call.

 

So precious, so beautiful, my inspiration, you cast such words into mediocrity.

My scarlet bride of pearlescent skin, I live to see happiness in your eyes.

You are one of a kind my dark princess, the most special thing on earth to me.

I will hold you tight forever and keep you safe until you once again can rise.

 

Even this dedication is too pitiful to show how amazing you truly are,

Because there are no words on earth that can describe a transcendent Goddess.

All I have to give you are things that can't be taken away, my soul and heart.

I will walk with your hand clasped in mine, no matter the hardship or darkness.

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For you my Brie, i wish i'd seen you online last night. I'm sorry it's so sucky but it was hastily scribbled down before work.

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  • ajocean silver member
    June 4
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    great piece thanks a million for sharing

  • evelynxxoo
    February 21
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    i think this is very touching and tells the person its meant for she has made a big compact in your life and no words will never be enough to tell her just how much i thought your poem was awsome

  • Aww thank you jon, Sorry this is late with the commenting, just catching up now ¬¬ butyeah. This is really good, alittle rushed but due to the time in which you wrote it, its good, I love it huni
    love you
    kitty xxxx