It's been a long road, with ups and downs
It's been a while since we recited our vows
So here we are, to show that they were true
That I still wish to spend forever with you.
We've had fights and arguments, but don't we all?
We've pulled through them all and now we stand tall
The love between us has grown stronger with time
So we shall be invincible in our prime.
I made a choice, standing at the alter
And I'll never regret it, nor will I falter,
When looking into the night sky and the stars
To remember the love that is eternally ours.
Author notes
Meh, the point of view is kind of stuffed up but ah well, you can change it if you want. I'm not so good with nice love poems, so yeah.... -.-
Good luck and congrats to your parents!
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- LOVE IS IN THE AIR! by Auburn Sunrise.
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Comments
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Thank you! It means that much more that you're not that into nice love poems and you tried so hard!
Besides, this is real. Not sappy-fake love that everyone knows doesn't exist.... it's true to life complete with ups and downs and for better or for worse.
Great entry! Thanks for the inspiration!
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