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Asleep Sensitive

It's good to be asleep sensitive.
You can't continuously judge a human without
him continuously  knowing he has been judged.
You can't sub continuously judge a human without
him sub continuously knowing he has been judged.
Expresses equality, I am the greatest.

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There's a difference between a man who won't allow his reality to be distorted
and a man whose reality can't be distorted.

Can anyone build me a car that runs off grass clippings?

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  • Tqop
    March 6

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    Bravo!

    It sounds better, and more polished.
    It is very deep, and thought provoking.
    I love the title. It is deep and nice to think
    about. Great job.


  • Tqop
    January 30
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    Very good poem. I like how deep it is. I like the title. Nice arrangement of words.