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What whiskey can't fix...

Can you see my reflection
In each glass that you drink
Are you still thinking
That you can reject me
Because you lost your insanity,

Can you still hear me crying
Trying to reach you from where ever you are
All I ever wanted you to see
Was how much I loved you
When you destroyed my heart for me......

  When will the pain finaly end
  I'm tired of hearing my demons
  Telling me it's ok to take one more drink
  Where are you, And what have you done
  With my best friend,
  If whiskey can't fix it,
  Then I'm going to have to end it
  With my fists....

I locked all my anger
Inside of the closet at the end of the night
And just for a lack of edicit,
I destroyed all of the lies ,
You left me with inside.....

And now that I've managed
To drain all of your blood out of the faucets of my heart
All thats left for me to hold onto...
Are these scars that have no costs....

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  • GypsySyah
    February 8

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    Whew!

    Robert, this is powerful- poem or song, either way, I feel it! Very strong emotions you capture, express, & bring forth. Well done, as usual!
    Peace- Syah