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Optimism in a Jar



The sands of time are trailing
on the beach on which I tread.
Though they trickle out behind me
I maintain the walk ahead.

For the world can be a lonely place,
but if you only look
you'll find a wealth of beauty
and opportunities mistook.

Take in your hands the ocean
and cleanse your fear and pain.
Remember why the earth is here
and ease up on your 'shame'.

For if you are dismayed or hurt
and feel the wrath of sin,
remember that the outside's out,
but truth, it lies within.


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Hehehe I'm in a gooood mood


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  • Oooh! Sinead this is wonderful, your rhyme is immaculate lovely Wise words here, I'll try and remember them in the future. Hope to speak soon dearie, Love ya!
    All my love,
    Kitty xxx