she lies in the banks
of tomorrow
whispering those promises
that were etched on the grave
she lies
on the stone roses
that catapult you to
immortality
she regulates
the beat of your heart
and the pulse in your vein
she lies
in the banks
...
she lies
...
Author notes
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Incredible ~
This whole poem is bloody stunning; it flows strongly, locks in the readers imagination and makes you wanna read it over and over
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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Amazing.
I love the repetition of "she lies" because something similar happened to me recently only it was a "he"
Still it's very effective. I get caught up in the words and try to work it in my mind.
Thank you for entering my contest and good luck
Shari
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this is beautiful
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