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rock n roll homeless

Missing image



loved and lost
promises slipped through the sewers
down Main St. up to Bank

can you spare a?

no, but can you please provide
a loving tribute
that will cease your suffering

amongst the ruins of your offerings

can you spare a...?


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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 13

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    Lovely ~

    What a sweet prompt and what a wonderful poem you created for the prompt hun Congrats on the HM

    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Desire gold member
    February 9

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    Welcome Back!!

    Thank You for sharing Your Gems of Wisdom~

    I'm Blessed to read Your verse again~
    Honored to have You enter~
    Many blessings to You in my contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes & judging will be done shortly
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~

  • Desire gold member
    February 3
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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: rock n roll homeless
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times~ I am Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for my contest You took the prompt and ran with it~ Bravo!!
    When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~ I have to say- when I read Your words~
    loved and lost
    promises slipped through the sewers
    when I inhaled these lines- this swelled eyes because there are so many who slip through- are forgotten Their lives lived not praised for the good given- from the CEO who helped a Fortune 500 company rise in profits - then lost it all to the soldier who returns from war- to nothing except cold concrete So sad to envision
    Love the direction You took this prompt Hopefully my words make some sense Powerful verse and message You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled-
    amongst the ruins of your offerings

    can you spare a...?
    Ominous Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit
    also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    with much love and light~ Desire~*~


  • Redorangeyellow
    February 1
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    wow, this is great! like, honestly for some reason i love this. great write!


  • csmmoms2
    January 30

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    Quite a picture prompt for the set-up.
    Well done dear poet this hits a nerve!
    http://allpoetry.com/poem/3401242
    -c

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 29

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    I think that you did good with this such a sad thing to see someone suffering thanks for sharing best wishes always be well.

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