what has happened
to the ass in blue jeans
pinned in
cut & trim
for the young and beautiful
where the hell has the ringer gone
song sniplets
mocking ma bell
with bullshit text
and then there's the pill for dipsticks
that circle jerk for four long hours
i won't call my doctor
i'll call dad
this
he would be proud of
male or female
the question of the day
collagen injected
silicon infected
with their obligatory flowers
in violet eyes
i have to mention
the spot on my ceiling
that seems to age
without licking itself
gracefully it grows
without rejection
in a world
of wrong number songs
and forever hard ons
tucked away
in tight blue jeans
somewhere
in the silicon valley of dreams
a man loads his 7 day pill box
with little blue wonders
for tuesday & saturday
in hopes of finding
that sagging beauty
behind a bourbon
wearing
levi's & high heels
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collagen injected silicone infected, those words will stay with me. i have no least favorite part of this poem.i don't however without reading the others see why this didn't win gold.
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: behind the bourbon
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times~ I am Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for my contest You took the prompt and ran with it~ Bravo!!
When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~ I have to say- when I read Your words~
i have to mention
the spot on my ceiling
that seems to age
without licking itself While reading this verse- I kept seeing Hollywood- and also refence to Pittsburgh for some reason and under the turnpike- an overpass- trash can furnice-fireplace- heck a place to keep warm- a hangout similar to the bar across 32nd street- (for regulars)This is raw and grabs hard~Wow~
Love the direction You took this prompt Hopefully my words make some sense Powerful verse and message You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled-
male or female
the question of the day
collagen injected
silicon infected
with their obligatory flowers
in violet eyes
Outright Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit
also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
with much love and light~ Desire
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Ohmy.
How tight?
The laying-on-the-bed-and-pulling-the-zipper-up-with-a-hanger tight?
I used to tend bar, so I get this.
Makes me think of Closing Time.
In fact, Im singing it in my head now, thanks for that.
The spot on your ceiling, my favorite part.
How come I've never read you before?
Jin
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wow....You captured life these days so well...
I still wear my tight Levis lol
nothing feels better than that
Once again I was happy to see something by you, I was enthralled and now sad to leave...
I never forget why you are one of my very favorite poets...
Lynda
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with heels....be still my heart
huge hugs
peace sweet lady
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