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Poor Me


Everday I wear
your mascara
            eyeliner
      lipstick 
  the glitter
metal cover for my breasts

~ a makeover~
     









and all I can attract
is a blue butterfly.












Author notes

"tristezza" by cosmosue at deviant art.


Ok! I usually would have gone for a dark perspective but somehow I wasent able to! So dont kill me if you dont like it! Its just something fun!

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  • just weak hands
    January 29

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    I was right ! It is amazing ^_^
    I love your take on the prompt ! It's so different than what I expected, which is great, if you ask me.

    Best of luck in the contest


  • Salty Hibiscus gold member
    January 29

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    great take on the prompt. i do sense some kind of darkness in your poem. good luck in the contest.