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This Girl

This girl,
She got me in a spell,
Her look, exquisite.
Her touch, erotic.
Her scent, seductive.
The words from her lips, temptation.

"She's my Angel,
She's my lover,
She's my very best friend"

Our love is strong,
The feelings so true,
Lookin' like a love song,
So, so, taboo.

No more bitter pills,
&& all those sweet-sweet lies.
Forget bout them cheap thrills,
Not to mention those misleading highs.
Baby you know we got them skills,
Even though the green still aint decriminalized.
Bummer.

Smiles a mile wide,
Eyes open and gazin'
Our past was a ride,
But together the future is uh-mazin'.

Forever n' always girl.
I'll always be you're shining star.

Author notes

Kinda a spur-of-the-moment kinda poem.
Hope everyone who reads enjoys it.

Specially S.o.S

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  • endless-lover silver member
    January 29

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    oh my gosh babe :]
    my eyes are all waterry and shit :[
    but n a good wayy
    i love this poem bunches its by far my favert ok well thats a lie cause i simply love all your poetry but this is on the top five
    omg i dont know what else to say but this is amazing and so are you i love you so much baby and nothing close close to you in the world thats right no more bitter pills, and truth is no high can ever compet with you i love you so much..xoxoxox

    your angel !!!

    for'eva and eva..


    • AddiKt
      January 29
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      I'm soooo glad you liked it babe.
      I just sat here n' listened to that song Angel by Everlast, n' it just came lol.
      That's where the little quote was from too...so yeh xD

      But anyway, thanks for always being there bby.
      I love you way-way-way mucho.