If I find out in time,
how to quell the current paradigm,
please then come with me,
and dance around the world we see
Follow the path pounding in your heart,
and the universe will do its part
To navigate you and perpetuate you,
to your right place
A little cosmic pocket of grace
Where you can taste,
the holographic embrace
Humming your soul into form
Remember why you were born
In me eyes you will see,
a reflection of your own honey
The time has come
to recognize our souls as one
A regenerating, constantly collective, essence
Waging war in its own transcendence
Its time to realign this paradigm
Take these words as a sign
Please then come with me
A pathway to immortality
Immortality,
comes when you are truly free
When your whole soul can see,
how this love,
is not just between you and me
But woven from creation itself
The guiding force of the universe...
connecting you back to source
So you can see, breathe and feel,
everything that's moving...
and everything left to heal
Its time
Author notes
BG by me. 
whats going on in your portals girls and boys?
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luved reading every word of it. ^.^
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The word choice was brilliant for this piece. however i think condencing ideas within the poem would benefit you greatly.
keep penning
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The chaos of the universe
and a little thing called time ,
man made and almost useless unless you have a train to catch.
In this unknown universe and this made up beromitor of passage it is imperative to follow your heart or to follow one who professes the way of true knowledge....
one that leads us to oneness with the truly unknown.
Our existence is immortal ...the poet speaks as a guide or spirit that will show us to the elusive truth.
The last verse is almost the purest I have ever heard it translated.....
... how this love is not just between you and me,
...but woven from creation itself.
.....The source....
Back to yourself in the infinite journey.
The poet give a oneness to the whole of humanity...
wisely saying that there must be healing and time to experience the mending that will bring us all where we are meant to be,
inside our heart.
There is no ...yes this is a nice poem...
what the reader has here is true poetic wisdom...
written for the masses....
to take heed....
before our made up calculation of how our life passes,
runs down to nothing.
Superb in an intellectual ..spiritual.. creative...poetic
fashion..
I have come to expect nothing less from this writer who I think the world of.
Not only a poet...
but I have come to know her as a teacher....
Many many blessings
my little gypsy,
I luv your heart lass,
Lowell
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I would start by asking about the current paradigm, it would really depend upon where the starting point is before beginning the dance to ascertain the where you are going. Many people seem too fearful to actually look someone in the eyses that they may never see the reflection of that which may indeed be helpful.
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i reall y like it i also like the backround it is really cool
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the background is great the poem has many great images in it as if in some type of trance, alot of tounge twisting words in there though
a good read
abigail
was
heart on sleeve
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It's funny that I read this poem after writing one of time and universe and all that good stuff. Is it by chance of "A little cosmic pocket of grace"? That is my favorite line. It seems to me like you are talking about finding a person, not in the essence of a better part, by in terms of a complete and opposite half.
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nice work, poet. This has a certain feel to it, like a dream. . .and I am impressed by the background. . .
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Nice job. Rhymed couplets are tough.
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i loved it
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