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[ In a perfect world ]

In a perfect world
  there is the sea
and we live there together
  in a little bungalow by the beach
There is passion in our souls,
  love encouraging every fiber of our being.

The sea is almost as warm
  as your body would be against mine
  intertwined within grains of sand
  enjoying the fruits of life together.

I have no fears, no qualms
  about you leaving,
no lies to deceive your perfect essence--
just the softness of your lips
  against my face
  the silence and the thrashing of the waves
  against our feet
telling me all I need to hear.

But this world isn't perfect
  within this concrete fortress
and beyond, there are barricades--
  feat and animosity
  masks the true emotion

In this imperfect world
  you are you secret
  living within a freezing, morbid heart
blocked--
  I simply cannot get to you.

The unfairness is stinging my soul
  as I walk along among the gray and wonder--
if I would take you still
  perfectly imperfect--

Of course.

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