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Bloody Merry.

I've had it,
I'm done,
Our run,
I can't do this anymore!
More of you
and less of me,
what you want,
what you have,
out weighs what I need
by a million to one,
So here I go,
never coming back again,
you've won,
go ahead,
sit down,
relax,
I'll leave you alone,
I'll drown,
rewound,
now this coffin is all mine.
Shut up.
Fuck this.
I'm done.

Author notes

So basically... I like this one... its amazing and if you dont think its not!!!!.... well... not much I can do about that.lol.

Okay, so what inspired me to write this was being forced to be a clone, only being excepted when you do what your told, that coloring outside the lines its punishable, which is rediculous, but I always felt retarded for saying anything, but when I aw that other people felt the smae I thought "hey... the hell with this" so now I speak out, I do what I want acountedly, I mean, I dont do EVERYTHING I want, cause I dont want to disrupt other peoples lives cause that would be majory selfish of me, but I also dont want people to labal me a friggin clone, even though.. in a simple matter... no one can possibly be a clone at all... idk, I think i just have a complicated mind set lol its not really that I just want to be differnet, I just dont want onlookers to be like "oh hey they look exactly like that other person who looked exactly like that other person." so yeah... idk lol

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Comments

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  • FallenxAngelxMisfit
    February 17, 2009

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    you didnt not put wat inspired you in your note please put it in and than reentry please i really like it


    • Asonine
      February 17, 2009
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      oh yeah!! I totally forgetted!! thanks lol

  • Thelonley94
    January 31, 2009
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    Awsome

    That was one of the most amzing poems ever!!!!!


  • lovemedeath
    January 30, 2009
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    yicks!!! tats deep!! but i loved it and i kno how it is!!

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