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Gambled

You said to try again
To give it another shot
Whats the worst that could happen
If I gamble all I got

Well, there is a little chance
That I could just lose it all
Go make my new home
Against a New York wall

Theres a chance, slimmer though
that I could win the game
But the chances of it happening
Are much too low to name

You said to try again
To give it another shot
Whats the worst that could happen
If I gamble all I got

-Andi

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-Andi

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  • xxlifexsucksxx
    February 1, 2009
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    I really like this one! It's 1 of the best ones I have read!


    • Giovanna Corvis
      February 15, 2009
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      Really? I mean I know I've written better then this!

      But thank you so much!
      -Andi


  • xtayzerx
    January 31, 2009

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    wow!!!! its so......*thinking* meaningful..........well done and ....jk!!!!!!.......anywayz...laterz

    ella