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Shivering

Frosty fading sunset
Crescent moon and Jupiter embracing
Cold air bites my skin

Behold!

Stars!

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  • ruhee
    January 29

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    Good work

    I liked that one. Stars can be amazing to watch at night. I have seen them forming patterns in the sky and they remind me of the dot-to-dot joining pictures that I did when I was in kindergarten. The Crescent moon is a symbol of beauty and some months back it was wonderful to see the crecsent moon in the sky along with two planets ...it looked liked a wonderful smiley.. Sunsets too are a pleasure to watch. Lovely imagination!


    • atomicmagoo
      January 29
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      Thank you! It's what I saw coming home tonight after work. Saw the contest announcement, and.... ^_^