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Submissiveness on a Sunday morning




numbness follows chastising,
doe-eyed submissions
betray my tongue
into the shadows of oblivious anonymity



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20 poets.

15 words a piece.

Prompt~ weakness

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 13

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    Wowzers ~

    Congrats on the Silver darlin! Well deserved This is powerful and the second & third lines rocks my world

    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 29
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    brilliant and velvety soft!


  • Cali
    January 29
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    Intriguing.