Your warm breathe on
my neck.
Your hands graze
my breast.
Your manhood deep within
my soul.
Our ecstasy explodes
Author notes
I was challenged to write 20 words of pleasure for a group challenge, so here it is.
Please tell me what you think
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this is a great stanza
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Hmmm somehow when i read the title "Quickie"
i think of a bathroom sink, legs in the air and ummm did i mention people out in the other room..lol
This brings many images to my mind. Well done Mistress.
Your eternal slave
ktulu
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shoot I didn't think of that I just may have to have a quickie 2
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i look forward to it
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Very beautiful and sensual!
Great work here and good luck to you
in your challenge. Thanks for sharing it!
Jeremy0826 -
Short, too the point and yet it conjures a picture. Nice.
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