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Shel of a Turtle

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Words are molten, wee pebbles to intentionally deceive, dishevel;
An obnoxious caricature of reasoning inutterably obtuse.
Why being beholden riddle; of my unmentionable aquittal.
My hardening armature, a seasoned thing, constructed against abuse.

Judgement maelevolent; raunch favorite, with nonchalance to savor it.
Truth; being an uninvited stranger, when innuendo will suffice.
Always with a maddening capacity; ignorant tenacity.
Seems no one is capable or stable of following their own advice.

A brazen, tireless unwithering, of constantly bludgeoned dithering.
Surrogated, cured humanity, you'll find an incessant lack there of.
No advocate for complacency, unadequate in its vacancy.
Antiquated unpure calamnity; when stubbornness stands in for Love!

The matter is apparently, various emotions transparency.
A mimicry of idiocy; venemous insanity's facade .
Loyalty is rather deemed flagrant; a querulous notion as vagrant.
Iniquity's vacinity, tenebrously engrained. Its all quite flawed.

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  • rant on!!!!!!!!!!

    i am just eating up your precision wording. that descriptive coup de te of the tongue.

    i can just peruse your linguistic revelry till shadows grow long of tooth.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    February 15

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    well done, I like both poems tho...lol

    you are just a talented writer!