though you try
it is still not cracked
Author notes
8 poets
8 words
prompt:
enamel
A contest entry
- Quickie I by Jasmine Rayne.
850 points, ended January 30, 8 entries
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Comments
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Gosh ~
You created this in just 8 words and from that unqiue prompt! Wickedly done
♥
Stay safe
~Manda


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I really like this. I feel as if you're talking about your heart here, in which case it makes me feel strong and independent. I love it. Great take on the prompt. You really have some talent. ^_^

-Jaz♥ -
Clever write, my dear.....It is true, cannot crack enamel...chip it, yes, but not crack it!


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ooh... love it, simply put. and simply put, i love it






