My amour was demolished when I lay eyes upon you
Yours I am; forever and true
Swimming in love with your warm hugs and life's breath
Our nights in, the Wii games and going to Gala bingo
Us doing the not so normal
Longing for a future of our own
Making ourselves work hard to the bone
Appreciating each other's day; with our hearts loving glow
Talking, sharing, confiding and being daring
Encouraging each other on when we sense they are low
Caressing my silky hair along my cheekbone
Regards in trying to encourage me to fall asleep
All the support that you have shown me over the last four years
I wonder what makes you put up with me and the hell I give your ears
Greathearted soul I saw in you, on the first day that I met you!
Adore you is what I will always do; (no matter how much it seems I moan about you)
Lovemaking is always so sensual; you hold back to be that extra bit gentle
Loyalty; we stand by each other as one
I know that we will always carry on to have great fun
Never-ending friendship that will flower with each season
(you give my life some sort of reason)
Author notes
Acrostic
My partner has been the one who has pulled me through most of the breakdown that I went through. I got with him just before I went really downhill, I always wondered if it was him that "made" me go that way. I realised it was him breaking my barriers...seeing the self harm...knowing the Eating issues and yeh I admitted it all and got the help. If I never got with him I don't think I would be here today and I don't think I would have got through my dad's suicide so easily.
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Looks like you founf you a good man. Keep him.
Loved the poem.
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this is a beatiful heartfelt Acrostic... written from deep within the soul..... thanks for entering
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thanks for entering
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thanks for entering!
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thank you for your lovely poem, love Kiarna
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Very beautiful!
I felt the emotiong in this piece thats for sure!
Wonderful write my friend. Thanks for entering!
-Mandi
Good luck.
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This was beautiful. I felt all the love and adoration in this piece.
Wonderful write love.
Thanks for entering
.xo
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Velvet tears- option 1, about the person I love. My AN is too full, i wrote this an hour ago x
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