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Fade Away

When you focus,
On the things that you cannot say.
Your thoughts become you,
As you begin to fade away.

Detactment,
Denial,
Things that all become clear,
As you think about your life,
And fade away.

Life's been hard,
though i've tried,
to keep on living,
and move on with my life.
But home,
Is where I long to go.
Home, is where I belong.

Walking in the gate,
to see all my friends.
And to reunite with my family.

Fade Away.
Fade Away,
Into the darkness,
that surronds me.
Fade away,
Fade away.
Don't give in,
there's a light on the way.

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This isn't finished, just some thoughts but i can't finish right now so, give some feedback so the last part can be awsome. thanks

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