Drums listened, ears whispered," liar",
the depth of soul's heart wept.
Rage became hysteric's briar,
into flesh, reality crept.
Words sting into tear ducts,
thoughts twirl the ring on hand.
Kidneys ignore moral conducts,
fingers throw a wedding band.
Grief crept to pains approval,
spine conceded angers need.
scorn became acquits removal,
and only conscience disagreed.
Feet ran to find their weapon,
tongue screamed an obscene oath
Blood slips where toes are steppin',
love found someone to loath
Author notes
Prompt: Poetic devices
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A very powerful piece, well written. My best wishes.
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Well done... a dark but enjoyable read. The last rhyme didn't make it
(pronounced low-th) but I really loved the imagery.
Ken
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Doesn't loath rhyme with oath?
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I truely enjoyed the structure in ur writing, and the words hold a compelling depth...
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Thanks,
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