look For Love
A bevy of beauties to choose from, which one will I extract.
if I give my love to one of them, will she swoon and interact.
Orbiting my head unending, so many their claims of amore.
I want to find just one who does not act like Zaa Zaa Gabor.
On to the carousel of love I climb, looking for the truest delight
all the while my heart beats strong, oh please let her be a sprite.
Stop the sad music and let me off, no more of this silly deceit
All I want is one true love, will they seek the same red meat?
The Game of Love
Each move I make is chancey,
my heart is now aleatoric.
one wrong move by me
it' ll go spasmatic aortic.
My castled king is guarded,
but challenged by the queen.
I thought her to be loving,
turns out she's hallowe'en.
In The Vally of Love
Beneath the Pompeian sky
in a guarded valley tranquil,
lives the lovelist of flowers
her golden hair wild as dill.
Daffodils and dandilions
pale to her gleaming hue,
one day I will come pick her
wed when she says "I do".
Author notes
A carousel -A game of chess -A garden
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Wonderful
Very well done. So very creative. Thank you for sharing
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is this pedestrian rhyme? I'm looking at the entries to see what people enter so I can try to come up with something. Since I do mostly rhyme and just a bit of free form I don't know what to do. This was no help
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Thanks
I have no idea what she means -
I sent a message but got no answer
am considering with drawing all together
seems like too much work for what could be nothing
pedestrian rhyme ? maybe she doesn't want it to be about people's names
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