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Should of Known

As you come down
On me again
Like a ton of bricks
Why is it that I am always the one
Who has to pay for your mistakes

Your lies and harsh words
Are heavy on my shoulders
As I cry myself to sleep
For what used to be

What used to be
Before I knew you
I used to be a real friend
I used to communicate

Then you came
I slowly floated away
I didn't realize at the time
You had me under your spell

You told me you were a different person
From the one in your past
That you had changed
I should of realized

Should of listened when they told me
Should of opened my eyes the first time
Should of knew after the 2nd time
Now 3rd time around I know

A fragment of my past
Is what you will remain
I'm sorry for all the people I hurt
Along the way


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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 3

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    Powerful and heartbreaking poem. It seems, to me, from this and another poem of yours I read, that this is a very real event in your life. That people warned you against someone and you didn't listen and got your heart broken.
    I can tell you from experience, this is the way it goes. Once our heart begins to beat for someone, our ears close against all else.

    Wonderfully written.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~

  • ooooh hugs xoxo its good and very deep. makes me feel some of your pain.


  • Samantha Marie
    January 30

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    I dig it.
    Sooooo how I feel right now.
    Sorry you feel this way hun, I'm right here with ya
    *hugs*


  • thearmsofsorrow
    January 30
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    This was so amazing x
    I can totally relate :/
    *hugs*

    love you x