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The soft air
Blowing, blowing
Rocks a billowy cloth
Hanging in the air

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  • Supa Fox
    January 29, 2009

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    That phrase...agh! Other than that, it was a very intriguing poem considering its length. Nice write


    • Spock
      January 31, 2009
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      Ha ha

      I wrote that one a long time ago and I make it a habit to not change poems that much after a while. This is a very short poem, so that would be a big change. Too bad!