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Camellias and Tangerines

 

 

 

 

 

 

Single flowers in the March-time
sun, month of beauty in the deep
disguise-- like rain upon camellias;
whispered celebrations.

Dance in the wind like petals,
sway inside my canopy; enjoy
the crumpled beauty splayed like
sunshine white on canvassed flowers--
crawl up my veins, I'm sure the
statue's flawless.

Single flowers in the March-time
sun, month of beauty in the deep
disguise-- like rain upon camellias;
whispered,

Adara Tangerine...

A silent celebration, and a beauty
so serene.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

CAMELLIA (White) Perfected loveliness, without blemish

I think that suits you ^_^ Happy 27th

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  • TheCorrodedBreed
    January 30, 2009

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    Stop being so amazing!
    hehe


    God...

    The rhyme of adara tangerine and serene is very wonderfully done. I love good rhyme.

    The second stanza has a wonderful "drift" to it, a great movement, placid and soft.
    The background is very pleasing, too, especially the border. I love that!


  • SomeoneBearyDear silver member
    January 29, 2009

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    wonderful!

    Such lovely thoughts! I don't know if I've ever seen a camellia... maybe I have. you certainly picked a wonderful background to match!