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refridgerator tears

when i guaged my age
by the number of hair cuts
and countable mistakes
heated arguments were spent on who
had left the refridgerator dor open
crying was reserved for practically everything
rather than as an alarm that
everything has gone wrong

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Written February 18th, 2004

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  • g r e y i s m
    February 18, 2004
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    That is a great write. I can definately relate to the haircut part(!), and I just like the style of this. As well, I liked the way that you ended it.