Armies are people who protect us
our family our homes and people we love
They put their lives on the line
to protect ours
they are bombed ,hit, shot, and killed
so that we can stay safe
they go out there seeming fearless
but they are just as scared as we
Armies are god's angeles
sent from above
as our ultimte plan of attack
when we need to solve majoir problems
although we would better connected
if we talk out fights verbely
or debating
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- Important Issues by pinksnowboots.
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Good message, but the spelling errors detract from the poem. use the spellcheck key to fix those and it will be very good.
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This poem remains the truth of how blessed we are to know that many are willing to sacrifice their exsistence for our very own, but still what would be better then that is for countries to stop war all together and stop their foolish greedy dreams of dominating the world, great write my friend, keep it up.
xX-Taisha-Chan-X
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AWESOME!!! nice point... too bad we cant do anything about it...
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Yea, wars are terrible. But they are oging on everywhere.
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this was very good, friend. I loved it!
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