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Faraway

You're always on my mind
And I can't forget your eyes
Even when I blink
In my heart your image lies

I just can't get over you
Because you're the star that lights
My dark empty nights

And I just don't know what to say
You always seem so ... faraway.

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  • DeathtoloveShade gold member
    February 18
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    I absoutely loved it

    This is really great keep on writing


  • Pixi
    February 3

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    sounds like it's en expression of real true suffering.....
    good job u did here
    salam

    sherry


  • khalakhelo
    January 30
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    I forgot these


  • khalakhelo
    January 30
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    astounding one!
    It holds alot of meanings and indicates a huge suffering...
    Take it over friend!


  • Rama
    January 30
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    just wowww !!
    it's amazing .. expresing exactly how i feel !
    keep it up ..

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