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Move Along Sweetheart

Move along sweetheart
There's no work here anymore
This place closed last week
Just go home

Move along sweetheart
Your degree is useless
Should have been a doctor
Get in the line

Move along sweetheart
You have to have that baby
There's a new law, changed time
Live in a box

Move along sweetheart
Put your right arm up high
These people have new ideas
Shut your mouth

Move along sweetheart
I know your kid is sick
No money means no medicine
Say goodbye

Move along sweetheart
You’re getting old now
No nursing home for people like you
So quietly die

Author notes

Dedicated to Pete
We'll have to face these dark times,but we'll face them together


A little explanation
Stanza 1: Loss of jobs
Stanza 2: Certain degrees mean nothing with such little work, unemployment line
Stanza 3: People start going to the right and women loose rights, abortion illegal, poverty heightened
Stanza 4: Extreme right comes into power due to fear and poverty
Stanza 5: NHS lose due to right ideas
Stanza 6: No nursing homes for the poor

We are in a recession, in times of hardship people tend to move to the right. Im real worried, things will only get worse. Rights will be lost and so will important public services. The extreme poor will be left behind, like single mothers and ethnic minorities and the disabled.

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  • Amy fan 251
    February 4

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    Interesting, and very true. Things are going downhill so fast now. This poem kind of sends a jolt of reality to the reader. Very good.


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    January 30

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    With the way the economy is now it is hurting alot of people. No matter what we say or do, unfortunately with the way the world is it will only get worse. A fabulous and touching piece of work.


  • PuRfekly-Phlaw3d
    January 30
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    nice

    hmm.. pretty good


  • Heather Awad
    January 29
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    Very good! Everyone can feel something here... the new times are affecting everyone


  • Best-to-the-Fall
    January 29
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    very sad...

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