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Gold Shimmers

As i look to the horizon,
I see gold shimmers from the sun,
Dancing on the surface of the ocean,
Like magic fairy dust or potion.
The normally blue but now golden sea,
Changing colour infront of me.

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  • ScaryGothMother
    January 29, 2009
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    beautiful!

    such a powerful image given in so little lines


  • Angelunawares
    January 29, 2009
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    oops!! i meant ' short and sweet!'

    wuz always a fan of rhyming poems.....


  • Angelunawares
    January 29, 2009
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    dhort and sweet!

    wua always a fan of ryming poems. Cant wait 2 see what else u hav 2 offer. keep it up!!