My Lady, My Love, let me feel the tenderness of your lips upon mine,
as we dance in the moonlight to this love song.
Holding each other our arms entwine,
as the passion within our hearts grows so strong.
Words of love whispered to one another,
as I gaze into those heavenly green eyes that entice me so.
Oh, this love we feel nothing could ever smother,
as we are enveloped within a kiss in the moonlight's soft glow.
In your arms I can feel my heart singing out to you,
as such sensual words we do speak.
As we feel such a strong bond of love so long over-due,
as we are overwhelmed my our affections mystique.
We dance in the moonlight holding each other so tight,
forever and ever more encompassed in our love's delight.
A contest entry
- LOVE IS IN THE AIR! by Auburn Sunrise.
2000 points, ended February 15, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - prewritten contest for all by serenity silvermoon.
490 points, ended January 30, 90 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Lovely ... I always think that line seperations are good though, to strengthen the rhyme and show off the sonnet to good advantage. Thank you for entering. Things about moonlight are always so enchanting.
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love your last two lines the best, but loved it all ... good luck
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Very pretty! :)
Line 6: should be "heavenly green eyes that entice me so"Other than that, this is wonderful! I like how it has a kind of antique feel - something you would read from the early 1900's. :) Timeless
Thanks for entering!
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