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Sub-conscious Messages

Can you hear Me,
this is your sub-conscious speaking
Can you Feel it
it's what we all have been seeking

A time of awakening
spoken of in prophecy
Further evolution of Man
beliefs maya prophets could foresee

Planet X is on the horizon
bringing death of their creation
Light and love will prevail
birth into a Galactic Federation

It is I the Universe
the Alpha and Omega
I have many names
such as Allah and Buddah

A time will come
when materialism has withered away
Bold and brave new age
evolving with a 12-strand DNA

Please open your eyes
and relax your mind
2012 is around the corner
get ready for this glorious ride

A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    February 15

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    Wonderful!!

    Love the approach You took with this prompt~ Excellent rhyme also message~ Powerful this is
    Bravo!! Also how You mentioned Alpha and Omega
    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Skybow silver member
    February 15

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    Congratulation on the Silver. This was an interesting take on the prompt, giving the universe, creation itself a voice...so very clever.

    • conjo2012
      February 15
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      thank you..

      I wanted to thank you for being able to see what I see in the form of my poem. Since I believe that we are all connected thru our souls which has a voice, everything comes from the sub-conscious before we become consciously aware it. just like everything comes from the Universe, and its actually the Universe's voice in everything around us and in us, is telling us that something is going to happen in 2012. I could say a lot more, but ive learned here is not the time and place.. I appreciate ya..

  • conjo2012
    January 31
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    Thank You both..


  • islekine gold member
    January 29
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    Love it!

    Thanks for a wonderful entry!
    Best wishes in the contest...and always!
    Write on!


  • penman gold member
    January 29
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    Wonderful

    Great word choice. A terrific write. Best of luck in the contest.

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