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Adults are so complicated

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I am a porcelain doll
But what they don't know
Won't hurt them at all

You see I come to life
Often quite a lot
But they never ever know
It would ruine my plot

I've had many owners
Through out my many years
All have needed me some way
All have treated me well

But then I met someone
Who wasn't a little girl
Yet a woman who collected dolls
And to her I was a good deal

Adults are so complicated
Sad, time and time again
But it was when she met him
I never wanted Adults again

That man made her cry
And for some reason I did too
And when he took her as his bride
To the trash I was moved

So as I sit here on this floor
Holding my shattered heart
I'm reminded never to part
With childrens loving arms

Because children love you
Through and through
And everything you hear is true

They keep you til they don't need you
And then it's time for someone new
How I do adore my children
They never leave me sad and blue

Author notes

4) A living porcelain doll is sitting on the floor crying while attempting to put her shattered heart back together.

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  • Kathraina gold member
    January 31

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    Aww hun this is so adorable! I LOVE THIS!!! 'Tis a masterpiece!!!

    ♥ Kathraina

    ["Often quite a lot" feels awkward. Kind of...redundant, maybe?]

  • A-muse-in-writer
    January 31

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    Wow

    Excellent write here, a beautiful addition to my contest. Love the journey you made from this prompt. Emotion filled and excellent. Seventh line should be 'ruin'