Those twin stars sparkling in a sea of green
as they stare upon me
filling me with such joy, such tenderness.
No words need to be spoken
from her lips that are as soft as rose petals,
for those eyes do speak more
than all the words a millions poets could say.
Within them do I see the truth within her soul,
the passion within her heart,
and the person she truly is.
How I would long to be lost within the,
to let my heart be released to her
and envelope her with such love.
Even though such beauty of her does exist
with everything about her,
it is those eyes which captivates me,
draws me ever closer to her.
Wanting to show her my love,
now and forever.
A contest entry
- wet tee-shirt comp (quicky) by solitarytear.
400 points, ended February 14, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Even though such beauty of her does exist
with everything about her,
it is those eyes which captivates me,
draws me ever closer to her.
Wanting to show her my love,
now and forever.
Yours words are beautiful... love the piece...Good luck
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Wow that was so beautiful
Your such a wonderful poet. This stance was my favorite;
"No words need to be spoken
from her lips that are as soft as rose petals,
for those eyes do speak more
than all the words a millions poets could say."
Your words flowed so well sweety. LISA 
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