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~*~ Free And Unburdened ~*~

Missing image
Within a rainbow of brightness,
a kaleidoscope of shadows and light
shimmered in the lunar glow.

Our souls entwined,
together our journey had just begun.
As silent as silk we walked hand in hand.

Lost in a trance of golden light,
all sorrows and past sins vanquished
we merged with the universe...

free and unburdened.

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 30

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    This is a very nice piece I loved it from the first line to the last thank you for taking the time to enter my contest best wishes always be well


    • onesugar gold member
      January 30
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      Thank you for your lovely comment and the HM
      Valued and appreciated
      ~sugar~


  • Yorkshire kevin
    January 30
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    awwww that's a lovely write, with such hope for the future x


    • onesugar gold member
      January 30
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      Thank you YK, a pleasure as always to have you stop by.
      ~sugar~


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    January 29

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    Amazed by your words that pen the beauty and softness of this image .
    Trails of wonderment and thoughts..
    Best wishes hun
    and thank you for sharing
    Julie


    • onesugar gold member
      January 30
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      Thank you hon, glad you enjoyed this
      always a pleasure to have you comment
      ~sugar~


  • Swtpoetryman
    January 29

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    FREE AND UNBURDENED, INDEED!

    Was that tall, dark, and handsome man holding you hand WAYNO from THE SNOWVBALL WARS? HE! HE! It sounds like someone has fallen head over heels to me - and not from one of THE SNOWBALL KINGS volLey of snowballs either - even though they have done the trick in the past! It sounds like TRUE LOVE at last, Baby - in this world and out of this world too. GOOD LUCK in the contest with this universal piece.
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.

    • onesugar gold member
      January 29
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      Aww, thank you sweet for your lovely comment.
      Head over heels isn't the word, it is true love hon,
      like nothing I've ever known before..out of this world
      and I am oh, so ravelled up in it. It is beautiful hon
      and something I wouldn't want to have missed.
      A pleasure to have you comment as always
      Love you Chelle xxx

  • midnightblue1272
    January 29
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    Pretty.

    Very pretty words, sis. I sense a lot of tranquility in this one. Good job.


    • onesugar gold member
      January 29
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      Thanks bro, glad you enjoyed.
      A pleasure as always
      Your sis ~sugar~


  • Dark Otter
    January 29

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    Well put together!

    I love the whole gestalt of the picture, background, font color and poem. It has a good feel to it and I expect it to do well in the contest. Good content!


    • onesugar gold member
      January 29
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      Thank you hon, I try.
      As always your comments are appreciated and valued.
      Love ~sweetness~ xxx

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