Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Left behind?

Fall  

 

Help me cast out the wicked darkness
that stands embedded within this soul
like deep open wounds from a razor cut
once done, I no longer hold control.

 

My hearts restless as storm blown seas

with upset winds tearing lives I seize

To all in its way are completely let go

no feelings...just nothing left to show.

 

I lastly raised the bar staking my claim

for a little wealth that never had came

These troubled waters surround my path

and tastless voices of consuming wrath.

 

Cold images of death enjoy this smile

as I stand alone on an old concrete isle

Countless shades in color, yet all cerise

just let me go and give me some peace.

 

 

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5

  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    April 25
    Edit | Reply
    Oh wow....
    This is really exquisite! I adore the way you brought her to life I could feel each moment of sadness, the pain in her breath and the simple desire to end it all and live in the silence..

    Beautiful!!
    Shari

  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    January 31

    Edit | Reply
    This seems as though it might be inspired by the image?
    I hope you'll let me know when you are done so that I am able to read it, dear Gets

    xx

  • piccola silver member
    January 29
    Edit | Reply
    when we see a sad write that is heart wrenching we always hope that it is just a muse talking; maybe a prompt for a contest or something. Such are my thoughts now. It is very hard to think of a friend being in such pain and it makes me feel helpless. Best wishes in the contest.


  • Pianokidd
    January 29
    Edit | Reply
    nice...i love ur words


  • Janice M Pickett
    January 29

    Edit | Reply
    WHOA! I do hope this is not how you really feel? excellent work though. All the best in this contest.

1 - 5 of 5