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A Moment of Happiness

Moments of inspiration come with the sunbeams,
a touch on the skin and it wakes the blood,
when life was torn apart from the same old seams
and there's a shadow where once you stood.
Moments of life spring from the melody
of joy played loudly in ears made dreary,
when indulgence is not sin but memory
of what you did when life was less weary.
Then simple things once more can make you shine
then simple words are newer kinds of bliss
and those things you love are triply fine
when you can fix your whole world with a kiss.


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Upon having a moments revelation that I was the only one who was actually putting pressure on myself to be good and work hard etc and I could probably give myself a break because no one was going to judge me for it.

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  • HereComesTheSun
    April 14, 2009

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    you do a great job painting this picture and i really latched on to all your imagery. great job with that you really have it down
    thanks for entering