tarragon and trepidation
in degradation of
the dragon days
of distant summers
dreams could fold
in old and mushrooms
learned in sensibilities
of those screaming
normal
mediocrity can
shake a soul naked
cold and left to
empty pots of gold
stolen by those
who say
be reasonable
unless you decline
A contest entry
- Word Prompt - Wishful Thinking - 10-50 Words by Kari.
700 points, ended February 10, 2009, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Reader interpretation and critical comment welcomed
Comments
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Very well done. Thanks so much for your entry. Best of luck to you in this contest.
Kari -
Wow~
I absolutely love the content and in this captivating write, the wording all in it's proper place with style and grace, and the flow is remarkable. Thanks for sharing your gift here with us. All the best within the contest as well.
Peace. 
-Timothy
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