oh, won't you dance with me,
dance through the stars,
all night long.
hold me close,
hold me tenderly,
hold me in your arms
filled with love.
whisper in my ear-
tell me your dreams
tell me your heart,
what you hold dear.
make me understand,
what you cherish,
what you love.
I can only hope
you know these thoughts
and feel the same
as you took my heart with you that day..
do you still think of me too?
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prompt 1
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I smile as I read this wonderful poem and as you can see to the left of this comment I an dancing with you
Love,
Amera♥
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Wow
Love this beauty and tenderness of this one. I hadn't expected a take on the prompt like this, but this is the reason why I love competitions. Gorgeous poem, breathtaking meaning. Wonderfully done.
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Wow~
Oh My Word You just took this prompt and went to another level with it
Excellent this is Beautiful~
Powerful energy also images tug at the Heartstrings 
I can imagine some serious dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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my dear Sis know he loves you beyond dewdrop kisses and eternal dreams -- and to think I thought I was done crying for tonight obviously not. well done and many loving blessings always xxxx
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