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Which Is Worse (Job And Fun) or (Music And Insanity)

All work and no play brings home a days worth pay.
No work and all play makes me stay away from home all day.
An unbrushed mouth has a breath smell of a skunk.
After getting a rootcanal from a dentist makes my breath smell of a drunk.

Music in the head will bring up a migraine.
No music in the head will bring you to bed.
The neighbors loud music brings out a woman with curlers and a shower cap is a dread.
The shower cap lady will cause you to go insaine.

Author notes

I choose this poem Which Is Worse(Job And Play) or (Music And Insanity) as my worse poem for this competition.

A contest entry

what are the most and least impact that this poem has towards you personally

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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Comments

  • ImNotTheAnswer
    January 29

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    I am slightly confused, but maybe I hadn't made my self clear. I wanted the worst day of your life, not worst poem. but that's alright, I liked it, and enjoyed reading it.

    Thanks for entering

    .xo