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Passion Ignited

Within the moment of deep kisses and burning beds,
we find ourselves lost within the fiery passions
that have so long been locked away within the heart.
Believing that it will never be released,
that is until that one soft and tender kiss
does unlocks it within us.
Then we are consumed
within the wondrous bliss
of naked flesh pressed against each other,
hands caressing each others body,
and the enchanted pleasures that it does bring.
Oh sweet tenderness of love,
how it does lift us up to new heights,
giving us strength that we knew not of.
Within that kiss
such exhilaration of the heart is brought forth,
and within that one moment....
that one night....
the world no longer exists.
And we are reborn
into the garden of our own delight,
where our love is free to be expressed
the way it so longs to.
After the moment is over,
we lay there within the tangled sheets of the bed,
limbs entwined
as our lips meet in the same deep passionate kiss.

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  • jul
    January 29

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    very hypnotically written. i loved this one.
    we lay there within the tangled sheets of the bed,
    limbs entwined
    hmmmm Sweet!!!