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Reflection

I'm curious about my own curiosities
I can't believe I can't see past these
I need to..
Look away from you

Are you my beautiful?
Or are you just another stranger staring back?
Are you my beautiful?
Or are you just another lie..
That's gonna break me down?

You take me to a new place
You help me see another face..
Of this world
Why am I...
Making you...
My everything...
And more?

I can't believe I'm doing this again..

I'm curious about my own curiosities
I can't believe I can't get away from these
I need to..
Look away from you

Are you my beautiful?
Or are you just another stranger staring back?
Are you my beautiful?
Or are you just another lie..
That's gonna break me down?

You take me to a new place
You help me see another face..
Of myself
Why am I...
Making you...
My everything...
And more?

When I look into your eyes..
I see the beauty of the world

But no man can hold the world...

-Sakrit

One of my newer songs.. Thoughts are always nice.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Dr Satan
    April 26
    Edit | Reply
    I enjoyed the song without a need to hear the music. Timeless question though, isn't it?

    • Sakrit
      April 27

      Edit | Reply
      I'm glad you enjoyed it.

      And... Yes, it would seem as though it is. But it seems to be that the answer is typically the one that you do not want to hear.... Unfortunately...