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one word, one syllable
anger rears its ugly head
roaring fire, spitting venom
not stopping for a breath

aiming to puncture everything dear
marring the vulnerable, deluting the pure
hateful words are all thats clear
wound for wound, hurt for hurt

How much can be endured
every hit being absorbed
and returned tenfold upon a trampled heart

the fire burns out,
only ashes of regret remain
as cold as winter's piercing breeze they embed into my very soul

What have I done?



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thats what happens when i get angry. it consumes me and i do things ill later regret.

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  • MYsecondchance
    January 30

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    jennie you sell you're self short, this is amazing. the only part i didn't like well i though sounded akward was the last line of the second stanza thats it the rest was pure old...great job jennie!