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Its Hard

Its hard to breath....when your not here
Its hard to think... when your the only thing on my mind
Its hard to focus... when you are all I see in my eyes
Its hard to dream... when you are in them
Its hard to hope... when you are all I hoped for
Its hard to love... when you were the one I loved
Its hard to look at her... because she is a creation of you
Its hard to cry.... when I have cried so much
Its hard to smile... when I always smiled with you
Its hard to remember... when you are all I can remember
Its hard not to hate... when that is all I feel
Its hard to be okay... when I am not
Its hard to be by myself.... when I know its for good
Its hard to live...When I have to spend the rest of my life without you



Author notes

Its not the best, but I have so much pain I am trying to express it... Its nothing like I used to be able to write thats for sure, but this will do for now.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • FallingRainDrop
    January 29
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    this is so incredibly heart breaking, hun. but such a good poem, it has such strong emotion that even though i have no idea who you are i feel your pain and im really sorry for what you are going through. keep writing though cus it does help expressing it and your work is absolutly amazing! stay strong :]