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Moving

How I see myself is not always how the world sees myself,
How I see myself is not always how I would like to see myself.

How I see myself is not always how I should see myself,
How I see myself is not always how I want to see myself.

The good, the bad, I take it all. Myself is how I am.
Myself is what I am. Myself is who I am.

The good, the bad, I take it. Myself is how I am.
Through and through I am myself, take it all or take it not.

How I see myself is how I see myself,
This poem lacks rhythm, it lacks life.

I do not, which is what makes me alive,
I do not lack rhythm nor life. Fluid motion, never the same.

Always moving, always changing, never the same-
The poem it is the same, never moving, always the same.

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