There's a lot of life in me at this time.
I'm on and shedding light around this place.
I'm responding to a contest of rhyme.
I'm running in a competitive race.
Just learned what personification means.
Also looked up different forms of sonnets.
Boy! I am hot and just throwing out beams.
For adults these are, no baby bonnets.
I, myself, the subject of this entry,
Do have to get this right cause it is I.
Got to be my best write of this century!
Did not know my wattage was this high!
I'm the idea for this very poem.
This light bulb is positively glowing!
Author notes
Going at Personification backwards (upside down)
I know this is weak, but it is more than nothing
A contest entry
- Personfication, sonnets only by ecrivain01.
550 points, ended February 7, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honest Opinion?
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Bountiful~Unique...
It is an outstanding composition, "Idea" sings by the shore, and goes around the fourteen beaches giving the readers an intellectual sun-tan.
In respect and appreciation,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU, A.P.G.M.P.
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This is certainly very original and well executed. Congratulations on the silver.
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Congrats on the fine trophy and fine sonnet!
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Congratulations on your silver trophy Ellis! You deserve it after I read this piece. Hopefully the light bulb will glow for a long time to come!
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Congratulations on the killer silver... it was a novel idea and well executed!
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i dont know anything about personification but this write is nice and fun to read.. what i like the most id it makes sense to me even if i read this sonnet from last line to first.. that's cool.
best of luck in contest
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I hope you got what they were looking for? I enjoyed the read and your writing seems to always be expanding in different directions. That is always a good feeling to let off a little creativity shot other than normal targets. Be well. RC
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Very well done! Enjoyable and very appealing. I hope you win.
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Outstanding
This got me smiling. I liked the line about the baby bonnets and the high wattage. You always shine very brightly - its all that natural talent. This poem has great flow and a huge amount of originality.
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Actually ...
I think it's quite well done. Weak is not even relevant. I can't say it will win the competition, as there could be many more entries that might challenge it, but it's a good job nonetheless.
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Your notes say this is weak? It's not weak at all! It's a fantastic sonnet! The sonnet is my favorite poetry form and this one is a delight to read. The rhyme is great, the meter wonderful and the image vivid. You placed the Volta perfectly at L9 and delivered a wonderful summation at the couplet.
Love,
Amera♥
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i think it works quite well
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ELLIS! I am giving you a standing ovation!
A sonnet that makes me smile with pride for you, good Poet Sir!
I loved discovering this poem and think it so COOL! 
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