Standing strong and tall
The brave knight
Will conquer all
That his enemy brings
His heart belongs
To his country, his Queen
And he shall protect
Her till death
His black stallion
Will take him
Into battle
For the fight
His sword
The bringer of death
At his side to assure
The life of his Queen
Fight he will
Until his enemy has fallen
This brave knight
Will bring victory on this night
~Lady Raven~
Author notes
I love this pic, wish I knew where to find him.
Written February 18th, 2004
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It's true, the graphic is awsome, and your poem really describes him as a true hero, Nice write!!
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well-done
wow this one was enjoyable to read great passion in the charcter awesome write well-done -
well done
Well done. Castle reminds me of:
www.castles.org/Chatelaine/EDC/ed.htm
This was a good read and a nice reminder of the history I have been missing so much. Yea, my course is finally over.
John -
The reason you can't find him perhaps you're searching him in Ireland... try in Scoldland in Scotish kilt...lol... well written... thanx for sharing...
mina -
-staring at picture-
-drooling at guy in picture-
-dreaming of guy in picture-
-reading your (fabulous) poem-
-goes back to staring at guy in picture-
-Then decides to write a comment-
Lovely description. Would make a great story!
Peace and love
Edited on Feb 18, 5:10 p.m. because ''. -
OMG, if that is you, I will be right over.
Thank you my dear for reading.
Hugs and bites, Lady Raven -
Hey how did you get my picture??????? I was modeling my new kilt in that one............lol. Great write although I wasnt hindered by the picture, like some of you were, I thought that it and the swords gave a great impression the whole motief (nt sur on th spellng). I enjoyed an insight to what you ladies find appealing.....lol. Have fun, take care and thanx for sharing.
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*drooling*
mmm...brave irish knights...donuts....sex...
Great poem. I would suggest you stop putting pictures of yummy men right above your poem, because it takes some of us up to 15 minutes to stop drooling and actually read the poem. =) lol
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aaah absolutely beautiful..i loved it.
wonderful poem and the pic and background are brilliant too.
Ann -
Oppps, boo boo. Thank you for the correction and I am very happy that you enjoyed this piece. I had fun writing it. Hugs, Lady Raven
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Well done
Both the poem and graphic are outstanding. I can certainly see where you got your inspiration for this piece.
He's quite delish...even to a jaded old woman's eyes. I have one slight suggestion...there appears to be a typo at the beginning of the second line of the second stanza. Thanks for sharing this lovely little fantasy poem. 
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wher can i find a man like that, great write
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oh right, we don't want that... then we won't get to read ur cool poems
hehe
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But then I would be sleeping 24/7... Thank you for reading this and I am glad you enjoyed it.
Hugs, Lady Raven -
lol... u can always find him in ur dream
ahem... very well written poem
love the description. Yeah the pic is great too... lol!
Keep it up.
Love
Seraph
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