I can feel the weight
of the world on my shoulders
and for once
I just don't wanna bear it.
I just want to be able
to rest my wings,
and stand tall
-- without fear of slipping
off the edge
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- Quickie #3! I think... I lost track ..lol by Sweet Impatience.
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Comments
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HOODWINKED
How well I know these feelings, yet I know I do not bear the weight of the world. But, it sure feels like it sometimes.
Soon, soon it all will go away. Once again, you have spoken volumes yet in so few words. Very well done!
Luv & hugs, BonnieQ
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Yes..we all wishes to have the freedom..but is it easly avaialable...? perhaps not..and this is what the truth is..well thought poetry..
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this poem is incredibly sad.. I've felt like this many times. sometimes things in life and even life itself just get way too much to bear at times..
I do have a question which prompt is this poem for.. please place the option in your AN.. thank you
good luck
kat
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Don't we all?
But anywhoo... this is once again magnificent! Good luck with your contest!
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