she always used to say...
but no, it hurts to think
of the way her lips moved
how her eyes seemed to link
my soul to her true self
in a way I'd never seen,
and it hurts me to think
about what could have been
and that day was so brilliant,
sunlight falling through her hair,
dancing in the kitchen,
spraying gold everywhere
another surfaced memory,
a night under the moon
holding her through the pain,
so she'd never be alone
all the tears come now
what i spoke was true,
when she said she loved me
and I said "i love you too"
What did you think? I'm planning on entering this in a contest at my school so please give me advice!!
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wow that is a very good poem and i like the way it flows and the emotion u put into it nice write keep it up
♥ayla
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a good piece of poetry, a soft sigh poem that lingers on the beats of the heart, love is a dream, twisitng us.
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Awws. I think it's adorable. Well done.
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aww this is so sweet, I really like love poems and this one is great! good job
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i like it alot!
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